A Poem About God Vs. Existentialism

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  1. Dwight Ward

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    Earth Evanescent
    Maxwell Anderson

    If other planets dark as earth
    About dim trembling stars
    Carry frail freight of death and birth,
    Wild love, and endless wars;

    If from far, unseen motes in flight
    Life look down questioning
    This helpless passage through the night
    Is a less lonely thing:

    But if unchained through empty space
    Drift only shell and fire
    What seeks the beauty of this face,
    What end has its desire?

    A candle in a night of storms,
    Blown back and choked with rain,
    Holds longer than the mounting forms
    That ride time’s hurricane.
     
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    This is the type poem that bothers me. It's flows nicely. It's probably a profound and beautiful poem. I'm just not smart enough to speak or read like that. It makes my head hurt trying to figure out what he's trying to say.

    Just spit it out, Max! ;)
     
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    I'm with you on a lot of that, Nancy. You're certainly smart enough to either speak or read as he does, so stop that. Just because I posted it doesn't mean I get all he's saying. It's only profound or beautiful if you think it is.

    I'm trying to puzzle out these lines:

    What seeks the beauty of this face,
    What end has its desire?

    I think the 'it' must be a consciousnness seeking God but I'm not sure.
     
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